Prompt:
Begin a story describing only two hands. Use the physical
characteristics of the hands, as well as any relevant activity or movement,
gesture, fidgeting, and so on, to reveal who the hands belong to.
“I don’t know what’s wrong.” She held
her hands palms up, helpless.
“When did it start?” His right hand
hesitated over the keyboard.
She touched her slender index finger to
her pursed lips, thinking. Her fingernails, well-tended and cut short, shone
the palest pink in the florescent light. “It’s worse now.”
He keyed her answer into the computer, the
nail on his ring finger chipped and discolored.
She covered her eyes with her left hand.
“I can’t keep going like this.” No wedding band, no adornment at all. The skin
smooth, well past the dimples of childhood but not yet bereft of the tissue
that precludes wrinkles.
He rested his hand on the counter. His
sun-browned skin as free of jewelry as hers. He made notes. “Can you describe
the sound you heard?”
“A terrible screeching noise.” She
clenched both fists and drew her shoulders toward her ears remembering.
“Could you tell where it was coming
from?” He touched the keys, his delicate movements at odds with his beefy hands,
the broad pads of his fingers.
“No. It was dark and . . . .” Her hand
fluttered above the counter, fingers gracefully curved. “I was alone and . . .
.”
He covered her hand with his own for the
briefest of moments, reassuring her.
“Not to worry. It’s probably the fan belt.”
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