Wednesday, June 22, 2016

A Letter to the Landlord -- Flash Fiction

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Dear Mrs. Bertrand,

I'm sorry if you want us to move. The girls and I've only been here for six months. Our lease is for one year with an option to buy, which we are seriously considering.

I do understand that we are not allowed to operate a business in this residential area, which of course we do not, so the city should not be concerned about us in any way.

We love your house. It suits us perfectly. Lots of parking. Even unobtrusive parking in the rear.

Perhaps you're concerned with the minor changes we've made. In the basement mostly. So each girl has her own personal space.

Plenty of bedrooms upstairs. And let me tell you, the elevator you had installed for your mother when she lived here is a Godsend.

Each bedroom has its own decor. One is all in pink like a little girl's room. And there's one with an African motif -- you know fake animal skin fabrics and a big ficus tree in front of the window. The one at the head of the stairs is more like a psychiatrist's office with a desk and book shelves and a couch.

The open design of the dining room/family room is perfect for entertaining, which we do only on a limited basis. We feel our parties fit in nicely with this quiet neighborhood. No loud music. No rowdy outdoor behavior. Nothing to draw undue attention.

I'm sorry if the neighbors complained about that time our friends arrived on their motorcycles. I assure you that will never happen again. But they certainly were not a motor cycle gang. In fact they were, every one of them, professionals. A couple of doctors, some accountants, even a judge. I know Harleys are loud and Harley riders do enjoy the sounds of their own engines. But did the neighbors tell you there were almost as many BMW's as Harleys in the group? Probably not. And BMW's are quite quiet. And expensive.

Mr. Davenport -- you know the Davenports? The neighbors to the north? He was most interested in an old Indian -- that's a motor cycle they don't make any more. He stayed the whole evening and has been back a number of times since. A charming man, Mr. Davenport. I believe their oldest son and your oldest play on the same lacrosse team. Both have visited us. They are fine young men. Very polite.

The living room is a wonderful room for greeting our guests. We are so looking forward to lighting the fireplace come winter. We've hung beautiful drapery on the french doors. Wine colored brocade, which we can close to give it that sense of warmth and intimacy. Judge Adams -- he rides the Indian, Mr. Davenport was so taken with -- he especially likes the living room. I believe Mrs. Adams is in your bridge club. She's never visited, but she seems pleased that the Judge has found some place to relax. Some place other than that smelly old bar where he used to go. Gets him out from under her feet, she says.

And the back garden with its hot tub is perfect. I especially like the wall and shrubbery. They  provide complete privacy. The Reverend, Mr. Smithwick sometimes takes advantage of the hot tub. Some days his work is just too stressful for words. And he so misses his dearly departed wife. You know him. He lives in the parsonage at the end of the street. Next to St. Lukes. That is such a beautiful church. I believe Mr. Bertrand has mentioned that you are members there.

If you are concerned about the minor changes we've made, you're welcome to come and look around. Although Mr. Bertrand has seen them all and he thinks they're grand. Early afternoons would probably be best for us. We tend to be late risers.

Very truly yours,

Victoria Shepherd

4 comments:

  1. Lawrence asked, "What was that letter for?" I told him it was a fictional letter his wonderful daughter wrote, and he said that he liked it. :)
    - Allie

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